Little Red (mylittleredgirl) wrote,
Little Red

fic help needed...

Anybody feel like preview-reading a Season 2 Ronon/Teyla fic in about an hour? I wrote it today instead of cleaning, and, as with most procrastination fics, I think it could use some serious help.

There were some rather strong Sparky undertones in my head as I wrote it, but they can be dismissed or played up at the reader's pleasure.

I'm on gmail chat as sachi.elena and AIM as newpunkuniverse, or just comment here!

P.S. Oh. Thar be porn, and some romance, and some crazy Athosian fanon. I require help and/or reassurance on the characterization in the dialogue, mostly, and generally whether or not the fic is crap. Yay!

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